My both hands is holding cheek in the palm, sit on wooden chair, look at an uncle to use pincers burn fierily however still the iron and steel of changeless form is put on the table, beating with hammer emphatically, , two …… scintilla 4 splash, steely adamancy is come out by little refine.
我双手托着腮，坐在木椅上，看着叔叔用钳子把烧得火红却仍不变形的钢铁放在桌子上，用锤子用力地敲打着，一下，两下……火花四溅，钢铁的坚强被一点点炼出来。
A very short time that, one individual —— protects the thrill through in my brain Er! Right, it is him! " iron and steel is how refine becomes " the hero in, one is having the hero of firm volition like iron and steel!
霎那间，我脑海里闪过一个人——保尔！没错，就是他！《钢铁是怎样炼成的》里的主人公，一个有着钢铁般坚强意志的英雄！
Work protects what Er comes in Zhu He from the children of average worker to guide next paces become the old practice of proletarian hero through writing, showed the revolutionary hero creed with undaunted in the ablution of blood and fire at that time kid and hopeful spirit, and the altruistic and consecratory spirit that builds period in peace and oblivious of oneself job enthusiasm.
作品通过写保尔从普通工人的子弟在朱赫来的引导下一步步成为无产阶级英雄的故事，展现了当时青年人在血与火的洗礼中大无畏的革命英雄主义和乐观精神，以及在和平建设时期的无私奉献精神和忘我的工作热情。
Most 4 have a narrow escape that allow me to astonish the nothing is more... than with admire to protect Er. ” of “ barely escape one's life this is impossible job almost, the doctor that treats to protect Er repeatedly by him the volitional place like iron and steel is open-eyed. He is fond of “ dizzily to go constantly, but all along also not hum. ” is the volition like this kind of iron and steel makes he grows step by step, grow finally the hero that is the proletariat.
最让我震惊和敬佩的莫过于保尔的四次死里逃生。“死里逃生”这几乎是不可能的事，就连为保尔治疗的医生都被他钢铁般的意志所惊讶。“他时常疼得晕过去，但是从来也不哼一声。”正是这种钢铁般的意志使他一步步成长，最后成长为无产阶级的英雄。
Review the childhood life that maintains Er, we can know, his firm volition is not inherent composition with respect to some, however he is in difficult in the —— that little training comes out is become in station dining room child labour; The training on building site; The rich on battlefield kills ……
回顾保尔的童年生活，我们可以知道，他坚强的意志并非天生作文就有的，而是他在艰苦中一点点磨炼出来的——在车站食堂当童工；工地上的磨炼；战场上的博杀……
From ancient up to now, which person that succeed was not to experience ninety-nine thousand seven hundred and ninety-one difficult —— to jump over after king Gou Jian experienced the disgrace of meeting check, undergo self-imposed hardships so as to strengthen one's resolve to do sth, make oneself country prosperous and strong rise; Su Shi is demoted for many times, still maintain state of mind, shed the poetic word …… that a lot of your people highly praise
从古至今，哪位成功者不是经历了九九八十一难的——越王勾践经历了会稽的耻辱后，卧薪尝胆，使自己的国家富强起来；苏轼被贬多次，仍保持心态，流下了许多令人赞叹的诗词……
After-thought we nowadays, do not have smoke of gunpowder of flames of war already, also need not endure the torments of hunger, surroundings and corporeal condition photograph are more advantageous than knowing how many, the “ hardship that the “ cross ” that we suffer endures in the place that protect Er is to not worth to be carried simply before ” . But nowadays, still a lot of people eat his head off, covet is easy and comfortable, this kind of behavior looks much more comical. Protect Er to be able to issue work to give wonderful in that way life in so tough life, with the volitional conquer difficulty like iron and steel, why do we abandon even in more advantageous than at that time life? Not, we do not have reason to abandon, blaze square can refine tapping iron, it is difficult that we should be greeted and go up, break through brambles and thorns-hack one's way through difficulties, give oneself wonderful life with the volitional refine like iron and steel.
回想我们如今，既没有战火硝烟，也不用忍饥挨饿，生活环境和物质条件相比不知优越了多少，我们所受的“磨难”在保尔所受的“磨难”面前简直是不值一提。但如今，仍有许多人好吃懒做，贪图安逸，这种行为看起来多滑稽。保尔能在那么艰苦的生活下活出那样精彩的人生，以钢铁般的意志战胜困难，为何我们在比当时优越的生活中还要放弃呢？不，我们没理由放弃，烈火方能炼出钢铁，我们应该迎难而上，披荆斩棘，以钢铁般的意志炼出自己的精彩人生。
Iron and steel holds out those who crossed blaze to gobble up, those who made a single person is tough. So ah, iron and steel comes out in the refine in blaze.
钢铁挺过了烈火的吞噬，成就了一身的坚韧。所以啊，钢铁是在烈火中炼出来的。(文/梁颖欣)