[wash a bowl]
【洗碗】
Lin Xiaojing
林晓婧
One day, the sky is cloudless, month in and month out is preparing to go the sitting room watchs TV, discover aunt sits breathlessly on sofa however, month in and month out visited father's sister so tired, the decision does bit of thing for her, month in and month out runs into a kitchen rapidly, put on oversleeve to prepare to wash a bowl.
有一天，天空万里无云，月月正准备去客厅看电视，却发现姑姑气喘吁吁的坐在沙发上，月月看了姑姑这么累，决定为她做点事，月月飞快的跑进厨房，穿上袖套准备洗碗。
She squeezes dishcloth first on the essence that wash clean, then, she takes tray, begin to wash a bowl.
她先把抹布挤上洗洁精，接着，她就拿起盘子，开始洗碗。
Passed a little while, there were a lot of hubble-bubbles in cistern, final bowl is washed the hardest above stuck bead of a few meals to work. Month in and month out uses hand cut dig or dig out with a finger or sth pointed, eventually clean!
过了一会儿，水池里就有了许多泡泡，最后的碗最难洗上面粘了一些饭粒都干了。月月用手抠了抠，终于干净了！
Aunt heard news of sanded rustle earthquake sounds, walk into a kitchen to look, see month in and month out is washing a bowl, happy say to her: “ month in and month out, myself will wash. ” month in and month out is laughing to say: “ aunt you are so painstaking, I help you wash a bowl today. ” aunt listened, say happily: “ baby, is the red carbonado that I give you to do you to like most tonight good? ” month in and month out says at once: Is “ good? Become very happy in heart of ” month in and month out.
姑姑听见了沙沙沙地声音，走进厨房一看，看见月月在洗碗，就开心对她说：“月月，我自己来洗。”月月笑着说：“姑姑您那么辛苦，今天我帮你洗碗。”姑姑听了，开心地说：“宝贝，今天晚上我给你做你最喜欢的红烧肉好不好？”月月连忙说：“好呀？”月月心里乐开了花。
Pedagogic commment: Young writer point of view very extraordinary, be being written is aunt and little girl. Very marvellous, the meeting when the attention thinks aunt sees little girl is washing a bowl has what kind of expression.
教师评语：小作者角度很与众不同，写得是姑姑与小女孩。很棒，注意想想姑姑看见小女孩在洗碗时会有什么样的表情。
Chen Yuhong
陈雨虹
A day, small red after eating lunch with mom, small red see mom lies in the very weary look on sofa, the heart thinks: Mom worked I should do some of business for mom. Small red the chore that becomes bit of in one's power with respect to decision side mom is vivid.
一天，小红和妈妈吃完午饭后，小红看见妈妈躺在沙发上很累的样子，心想：妈妈干了一整天的活了我要为妈妈做些事情。小红就决定帮妈妈做点力所能及的家务活。
Small red walk into a kitchen, cover to oneself on mom's glove, surround on apron, moved a chair, stand on the chair, left hand is taking dishcloth, the right hand is taking tray then a serious ground washs a bowl one.
小红走进厨房，给自己套上妈妈的手套，围上围裙，搬来了一把椅子，站在椅子上，左手拿着抹布，右手拿着盘子一个接着一个认真地洗碗。
Mom hears the kitchen came out sound, feel very strange, walk into a kitchen to look, it is small so red washing a bowl, mom pop eye, magnify mouth cries surprisingly: “ baby, you are fast come down, I myself am washed a little while. ” is small red listened to say: You had worked “ , you rest quickly. ” mom is opposite gladly small red say: “ you are a sensible good child really. ” is small red those who listened to the very pleased with oneself in the heart.
妈妈听见厨房传出了声音，觉得很奇怪，就走进厨房一看，原来是小红在洗碗，妈妈瞪大了眼睛，张大了嘴巴惊讶地喊到：“宝贝，你快下来，我一会儿自己来洗。”小红听了说：“你都已经干了一整天的活了，你快去休息吧。”妈妈高兴地对小红说：“你真是个懂事的好孩子。”小红听了心里美滋滋的。