I have a lazy father, he works housework rarely. Be in only on the weekend when now and then burn cook a meal, wash with washing machine wash the dress. Besides the job, he is not to lie on the bed to watch TV, sit on closestool to see a mobile phone namely.
我有一个懒爸爸，他很少干家务活。只有在周末的时候偶尔烧烧饭，用洗衣机洗洗衣服。除了工作，他不是躺在床上看电视，就是坐在马桶上看手机。
Zhou Yi comes Zhou Wu, in the morning when I get up, father had gone to work, when waiting for me to sleep in the evening, he works overtime to had not come back. Mom says jokingly to me: “ your pa is really magical Long Jian head does not see end! ” father swot got leading approbate. Arrived every year the end of the year, father can receive the honorary letter of advanced individual, still take stake of a lot of project. He takes us to go with this money restaurant has a meal, buy new clothes and toy to me, still take me to go pleasure ground plays.
周一至周五，早晨我起床的时候，爸爸已经去上班了，晚上等我睡觉的时候，他加班还没有回来。妈妈开玩笑地对我说：“你爸真是神龙见首不见尾！”爸爸辛苦的工作得到了领导的认可。每年到了年底，爸爸都能得到先进个人的荣誉证书，还拿到好多项目奖金。他用这笔钱带我们去饭店吃饭，给我买新衣服和玩具，还带我去游乐场玩。
Children, do you feel my father is lazy?
小朋友们，你们觉得我的爸爸懒吗？
The title of the article is very original, arouse a reader to read the desire that go down, is everybody curious be father of lazy ” of a what kind of “ lets young writer want to spit groove? Carry the first paragraph picture, we can see father is true “ lazy ” , do chore rarely, watch TV cozily everyday, let a reader can't help producing bad impression. Readable be over the 2nd paragraph hind, the “ lazy ” of former father is not lazy really, have a reason, as all parents, give evening early to return, work for ground of life work laboriously everyday, eventually also kongfu does not lose an observant and conscientious person, father obtained honorary letter not only, still have a lot of stake. The feeling that between the lines reveals is true, abundant, touching. In terminal point young writer leaves doubt to the reader, in teacher eye, your father is not father of lazy ” of a “ , be one conscientious, aspirant good father.
文章的题目很新颖，激起读者读下去的欲望，人人都好奇是怎样的一位“懒”爸爸让小作者要吐槽呢？通过第一段的描写，我们可以看出爸爸是真的“懒”，很少干家务，每天还很舒适地看电视，让读者不禁产生不好的印象。可读完第二段后，原来爸爸的“懒”并不是真的懒，是有原因的，跟所有父母一样，早出晚归，每天为了生活辛辛苦苦地工作，终于也功夫不负有心人，爸爸不仅拿到了荣誉证书，还有好多奖金。字里行间流露出来的感情真挚、充沛、感人。在结尾处小作者给读者留下疑问，在老师眼里，你的爸爸不是一位“懒”爸爸，是一位有责任心，上进的好爸爸。