The autumn is the season of the bumper harvest.
秋天是丰收的季节。
The leaf on ginkgo tree resembles young fan, golden, what fan took summer is burning hot, those who greeted the autumn is cool. Every arrive this moment, the sweet-scented osmanthus Qi Qi on sweet-scented osmanthus tree blossoms, transmitted a light sweet a faint fragrance.
银杏树上的叶子像一把把小扇子，金灿灿的，扇走了夏天的炎热，迎来了秋天的凉爽。每到这个时候，桂花树上的桂花齐齐绽放，传来了一阵阵淡淡的甜甜的幽香。
In the rice field, rape is beautiful people simultaneously smell head comes, resembled going up to autumnal shop golden carpet. Paddy people come out “ basks ” , bask in oneself fizzled out.
稻田里，油菜花们一齐探出头来，像给秋天铺上了金色的地毯。稻谷们都出来“晒太阳”了，把自己都晒黄了。
What there is a bumper harvest everywhere in the orchard is happy. You see that apple, red, let a person cannot help biting on one; Your look that orange, orange appearance, let a person want to pare taste; You hear the voice that that leaf gives out, let a person want to pick next that golden pear. Wind has blown a leaf, the music score that is the autumn adds on a few minutes of euphonic note.
果园里处处都透着丰收的喜悦。你看那苹果，红彤彤的，让人忍不住咬上一口；你瞧那橙子，橙色的外衣，让人想剥开尝尝；你听那树叶发出的声音，让人想摘下那金灿灿的梨子。风吹过树叶，为秋天的乐谱增添上几分悦耳的音符。
The apple is ripe, pear is ripe, the tree also is one every day become heavy. Orange is ripe, grapefruit is ripe, branch also is one every day become curved. Strawberry is ripe, la Mei is ripe, leaf also is one every day become low. As the arrival of the Beginning of Autumn, what is ripe, what bumper harvest.
苹果熟，梨子熟，树也是一天天的变重。橘子熟，柚子熟，枝头也是一天天的变弯。草莓熟，蓝莓熟，叶子也是一天天的变低。随着立秋的到来，什么都熟了，什么都丰收了。
Pass the fall, qiu Yi changes cotton-padded jacket, autumn pants changes cotton-padded trousers. Whats begin “ plump ” . Crop arrived this bumper harvest when bumper harvest, or it is a bumper harvest too late, do not have the hope of harvest. The person also is same, arrived to change when satisfying, satisfy, or it is flay a flint, do not have contented hope.
一过秋天，秋衣变棉袄，秋裤变棉裤。什么都开始“丰满”了。农作物到了该丰收的时候丰收，或是丰收太晚，就没有收成的希望。人也是一样，到了改满足的时候满足，或是贪得无厌，就没有满足的希望了。
Article language is beautiful, understand the rhetorical trick of an use analogy and parallelism, let a composition read rise bright able to read aloud fluently, and built artistic conception is very beautiful. The composition still is full of certain philosophic theory, pass pair of falls finally especially this seasonal characteristic undertakes generalizing summing up, get those who give oneself properly to comprehend, those who write is very marvellous. Full text love is true, between the lines sheds those who show pair of falls to love and the happy situation to the bumper harvest, let a reader get drunk among them. Full text structure is whole, distinct, echo of from beginning to end, get sth done without any letup, a very outstanding composition is whole, the teacher likes very much, hope you can continue to cheer, make persistent efforts, expect you next time write a composition!
本文语言优美，通篇使用比喻和排比的修辞手法，让作文读起来朗朗上口，而且营造的意境非常优美。作文还富有一定的哲理，尤其是最后通过对秋天这个季节的特点进行概括总结，恰到好处的得出自己的感悟，写的很棒。全文感情真挚，字里行间都流露出对秋天的喜爱以及对丰收的喜悦之情，让读者沉醉其中。全文结构完整，层次分明，首尾呼应，一气呵成，整体而言是一篇非常优秀的作文，老师很喜欢，希望你可以继续加油，再接再厉，期待你下次的作文哦！