Steely hard, because it passed thoroughly tempered,be; Giant doughty, because,be their body classics 100 refine, indomitable. " iron and steel is how refine becomes " in the truth that elaborated ” of such refine of a “ .
钢铁之所以坚硬，是因为它经过了千锤百炼；巨人之所以刚强，是因为他们身经百炼，百折不挠。《钢铁是怎样炼成的》中就阐述了这样一个“炼”的道理。
Childhood period, suffer all kinds of humiliate, smelt heart
童年时期，受尽凌辱，冶炼心灵
Young when protect Er innocent and lively, domestic poverty, wash clothes by the mother only maintain bread. Await in those days protected Er to had produced animosity psychology, he scatters cigarette ash in dough of past Abba home and by school discharge, must go restaurant works, premature experience social darkness, make he feels to inn boss and wealthy person detest. This made bedding to revolutionary road walks up after him.
幼时的保尔天真活泼，家庭贫困，仅由母亲洗衣维持生计。那时候的保尔就已经产生了仇恨心理，他往神父家面团里撒烟灰而被学校开除，不得不去饭店干杂活，过早见识了社会的黑暗，使他对店老板与有钱人感到厌恶。这为他以后走上革命道路作了铺垫。
Teenager period, gallant make a stand against, training volition
少年时期，英勇抗争，磨炼意志
After ” of “ October revolution erupts, imperialism and reactionary clique try in vain to strangle Soviet political power, the native place that guarantees Er also by drag in among them. After this, helaipei raised old Bushenweikezhu to keep the revolutionary enthusiasm of Er, made him add a Red Army man, for the country, go up in battlefield for Soviet charge forward, blossommed flowery green flower.
“十月革命”爆发后，帝国主义与反动派妄图扼杀苏维埃政权，保尔的家乡也被牵涉其中。在这之后，老布什维克朱赫来培养了保尔的革命热情，促使他加入了红军，为国家、为苏维埃在战场上冲锋陷阵，绽放了绚丽的青春之花。
Protecting Er is a patriotic heroic boy, when it is difficult that the country has, he develops front, valiant engage in battle. I think, he was to give tremendous brave composition energy of life certainly, pondered over sacrificial possibility. I think, if be me, dare go up far from battlefield, more do not carry engage in battle.
保尔是一个爱国的英雄少年，在国家有难时，他冲上前线，英勇杀敌。我想，他一定是付出了巨大的勇作文气，思考了牺牲的可能性。我想，如果是我，根本不敢上战场，更别提杀敌了。
Youth is commendable, but protect Er to place national solution on life, this kind of behavior is particularly commendable.
青春是可贵的，但保尔把国家解放置于生命之上，这种行为是尤为可贵的。
Young period, live difficultly, hammer into shape perseverance
青年时期，艰苦生活，锤炼毅力
After the war, because of body reason, the selection that protect Er goes railroad works, join the Youth League, fulfil his duty in the group responsible. The disease let him lose eyesight and working ability, his writing changing one's profession, completed autobiographical body novel by right of firm volition.
战争之后，因身体原因，保尔选择去铁路工作，并加入共青团，在团里尽职尽责。疾病让他丧失了视力与工作能力，他改行写作，凭借坚强的意志完成了自传体小说。
Protect Er in the group fulfil one's duty responsible make I am experienced quite deep, I what just joined a group am very confused still, but the direction that the force of the example that protect Er makes I understood advancement. Protect Er to insisted to complete a novel below the circumstance that the disease accompanies each other, and I is arms and legs sturdy? It is too difficult to always complain the move is too bitter, try to abandon writing. Anguish of susceptive of the place that protect Er is gotten more than me much, I am simply be inferior to from ashamed!
保尔在团里的尽职尽责使我感受颇深，刚入团的我还很迷茫，但是保尔榜样的力量使我明白了前进的方向。保尔在疾病交加的情况下坚持完成了小说，而四肢健全的我呢？总是抱怨着太苦太难，试图放弃写作。保尔所承受的痛苦比我多得多，我简直是自愧不如！
Protect Er, the iron ore of an under cover, the iteration of skillful craftsman is beaten make he is sent more hard, made iron and steel finally. Do not think we do not do this, want us to take exercise only go out to be not folded do not flinch, gallant and doughty commendable spirit, we also can resemble protecting Er same, be tempered into a steel!
保尔，一块隐藏着的铁矿石，能工巧匠的反复敲打使他愈发坚硬，最终成为了钢铁。不要以为我们做不到这一点，只要我们锻炼出不折不挠、英勇刚强的可贵精神，我们也会像保尔一样，百炼成钢！(文/烂葵花)